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Re: Hey everybody!
Posted By: Bill Ames
Date: Friday, 6 October 2006, at 6:31 a.m.
interesting use of the voices . . . an omniscient third person, perhaps? conscience? it works well.
Did you intend this as concrete verse, that is, is the shape of the lines important, or did it just work out that way? I think it works well as a decrescendo or sorts.
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