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My Redemption (Please comment)

Posted By: Matt
Date: Friday, 6 October 2006, at 6:32 a.m.

My Redemption (Please comment)

Ahh, I see.
You judge without judging.
You judge when you choose not to judge.
Yes this is referring to you.
Of course I mean YOU.

Why pass buy it.
You eagerly express to the full.
Then you check others expression and are lead to ignore.
Ya I know it’s all impossible.
All I ask is to do one.
Make ONE person feel that their expression had been expressed.

Listen to me,
The student of the tutor.
While I take no pride in being not like you,
Mean it not that you shant learn.
Let it be that the wise learn from his mistakes.
Let it be that the wiser learn from the mistakes of others.
I already know I will ignore this message.
But will you.

I go to what I do this for.
Please, help others.
What is Peace on Earth if not in paradise?
It is you taking 5 seconds to state,
“Your expression is appreciated”
Fine let it be a lie if it must but the truth is greatness-understood than it is perfect.
Yes, I say just do it.
To me for I feel lonely.
To thee for you accept it with meaning or not.

I understand if you stop reading here.
I understand if this is just one of those general expression yet but skipped.

BE ASHAMED
But a lie.

I require more help than the last.
No not in edition of myself. Yet appreciated.
In acknowledgment. But few of you. But less expected.
I ask please say YOU,
One word
“Acknowledge”

Maybe then hate, distaste or true sympathy for but one more helpless view.
(End Poems)

*This is not meant to offend anyone if it was taken that way. That was not my meaning as I viewed it, but that’s what poems are for. Please take the meaning of the poem as you do. If my previous statement contradicts your view of the poem please reply with your questions. Also please e-mail me your questions, or comments to ZAMASTER@AOL.COM, and please title it POEM.

Ahh, I see.
You judge without judging.
You judge when you choose not to judge.
Yes this is referring to you.
Of course I mean YOU.

Why pass buy it.
You eagerly express to the full.
Then you check others expression and are lead to ignore.
Ya I know it’s all impossible.
All I ask is to do one.
Make ONE person feel that their expression had been expressed.

Listen to me,
The student of the tutor.
While I take no pride in being not like you,
Mean it not that you shant learn.
Let it be that the wise learn from his mistakes.
Let it be that the wiser learn from the mistakes of others.
I already know I will ignore this message.
But will you.

I go to what I do this for.
Please, help others.
What is Peace on Earth if not in paradise?
It is you taking 5 seconds to state,
“Your expression is appreciated”
Fine let it be a lie if it must but the truth is greatness-understood than it is perfect.
Yes, I say just do it.
To me for I feel lonely.
To thee for you accept it with meaning or not.

I understand if you stop reading here.
I understand if this is just one of those general expression yet but skipped.

BE ASHAMED
But a lie.

I require more help than the last.
No not in edition of myself. Yet appreciated.
In acknowledgment. But few of you. But less expected.
I ask please say YOU,
One word
“Acknowledge”

Maybe then hate, distaste or true sympathy for but one more helpless view.
(End Poems)

*This is not meant to offend anyone if it was taken that way. That was not my meaning as I viewed it, but that’s what poems are for. Please take the meaning of the poem as you do. If my previous statement contradicts your view of the poem please reply with your questions. Also please e-mail me your questions, or comments to ZAMASTER@AOL.COM, and please title it POEM.

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