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Re: Rate my poem
Posted By: Bill Ames
Date: Friday, 6 October 2006, at 6:32 a.m.
Very strong sentiment, and believe me, I can relate to it.
I'm not sure rhymed couplets are your best form, though. Maybe you could edit a bit of that out and concentrate on the imagery . . .
I'm looking forward to your future posts!
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