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Posted By: Steven
Date: Friday, 6 October 2006, at 6:32 a.m.

Ok im not very good and i just started writing so here ya go:





My prayer:



Has fate betrayed me yet again

To the depths of despair where ive been

When things start to turn around for me

Fate casts me out into the sea

With no light of life in sight

I have no love whom would light

Why am i all alone

When others find their own

And why do those who hurt 

Get whom they want and i get dirt

Why do i do all for her

When she might love him ever and ever

She hurts me deeply everyday

But yet i will continue to pray

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Rate my poem
Steven -- Friday, 6 October 2006, at 6:32 a.m.
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lesley -- Friday, 6 October 2006, at 6:32 a.m.

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