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Just a thought

Posted By: Tom
Date: Friday, 6 October 2006, at 6:32 a.m.

Bill,

Your poems lack a sense of spirit. You are good at getting the point across, but to capture a true ability of writing poetry you must consider each word, each word Bill. You are close but your poetry must mature. Remember it is your interpretation of the world. Congratulations on getting this far, not many have been able to achieve your level of talent.

TK

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