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Re: My Whole Soul
Posted By: Matt Zamora
Date: Friday, 6 October 2006, at 6:32 a.m.
Please Know That: This is a open enviroment for sharing, and that Yes you are accepted like anyone with the shortest lymric to share. I thought your poem was nice, I would only add some comas, and if you feel like it group afew more words per line. It would make the peice look more profesional. Good Job.
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