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Re: a poetic rant...

Posted By: Matt
Date: Friday, 6 October 2006, at 6:32 a.m.

I really like the poem it's self. The only thing i would change about it is it's format. It would make for easyer reading for the reader if you seperated the words every so often. Otherwise you have inspired me to try a poem with somthing simalar to your "ation" words. Thanks

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Re: a poetic rant...
Matt -- Friday, 6 October 2006, at 6:32 a.m.

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