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Re: My first, and only, two poems..tell me what you think

Posted By: Ravenheart
Date: Friday, 6 October 2006, at 6:32 a.m.

Good. I like the sense of loneliness they portray, without being wholly negative. I suspect that if you start with poems like these, you will have written more. If I'm right, please share them!

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Re: My first, and only, two poems..tell me what you think
Ravenheart -- Friday, 6 October 2006, at 6:32 a.m.

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