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Re: ...where the heart lies down to die

Posted By: ~Maggie~
Date: Friday, 6 October 2006, at 6:31 a.m.

Hmm... I can't exactly place my finger on why, but I like this. The image of this cloistered, stuffy enclosure... the title is intriguing, it lends an entire new meaning to the words. The short stanza lengths are perfect, nice rhythm. Great job. One thing--is the repetition of "blind" in the first stanza intentional? i.e.-to emphasize? it made the rhythm stumble a bit, but hey, poetic license. ;o)

~*Maggie*~

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Re: ...where the heart lies down to die
~Maggie~ -- Friday, 6 October 2006, at 6:31 a.m.

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