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Posted By: Racquel Cook
Date: Friday, 6 October 2006, at 6:31 a.m.

Itís beautiful shade of green
That matches perfectly with its rectangular shape
Which fits right in with a dead presidentís face
The amount of it worth so amazing placed in the corner
Itís magnificent obsession, which it feeds off to its owner
Its amazing ability to make you feel proud
But used the wrong way could have you sleeping on the ground
Some become very greedy when it comes to this paper
Some become very wealthy then broke five years later
So watch out for magnificent wonder that controls all people
Its beauty is deadly, but can be very useful

I was just looking for suggestions on the poem. If you liked it, hated it, or whatever.
Thanx

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